You are going to travel soon. Write to your neighbour and ask for help. In your letter say,- why do you need help?- what do you need her to do and when?- What should he/ she do if anything happens?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ant official project on Monday morning. I would request your helping hand in taki...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...aking care of my pet in my absence. I could have sent Bruno to my parents hom...
^
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e caretaker of Bruno is also fallen sick . In this circumstances, you are the only...
^^
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...taker of Bruno is also fallen sick . In this circumstances, you are the only hope fo...
^^^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he only hope for me whom I can rely upon during any emergency assistance. Bruno i...
^^
Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ice a day i.e in the morning and evening , along with a warm bath in the morning. ...
^^
Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...use much inconvenience to you as well as you will enjoy Brunos company indeed. ...
^^
Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you will enjoy Brunos company indeed. Waiting for your positive response. Y...
^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241803278689 0.220444632235 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.147540983607 0.167888034529 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0491803278689 0.0606518309736 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0614754098361 0.0506257000042 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.122950819672 0.118615021944 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118852459016 0.107062808482 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0409836065574 0.041066498444 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39650223298 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286885245902 0.0385302599488 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0696721311475 0.0714148451538 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245901639344 0.0191574576366 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00819672131148 0.00930345855455 88% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1206.0 1141.60824742 106% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.134020619 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43243243243 5.53046319177 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78085437643 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.243243243243 0.284621296913 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171171171171 0.211203875043 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0990990990991 0.133321485273 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0630630630631 0.0843313296314 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39650223298 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630630630631 0.622163163488 101% => OK
Word variations: 65.9762092261 62.8969750728 105% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8571428571 16.4300151701 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9610370987 44.7399317507 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 90.9928171075 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 16.4300151701 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.613754768223 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.09278350515 382% => OK
Readability: 32.9742599743 37.5504026743 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.20987654321 1.13073093955 107% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281260707953 0.331212695627 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0605667152375 0.0927372745006 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0565485485278 0.0736520305886 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518351022539 0.579516596996 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180272517856 0.180689518051 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933089431246 0.122183219658 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504178629132 0.0765303033291 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.159499699214 0.211926503985 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113984486474 0.0737400523855 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168713344409 0.203819188451 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473045398703 0.067151250289 70% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.45360824742 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.0206185567 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 4.73195876289 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.56701030928 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 221 250
No. of Characters: 938 1500
No. of Different Words: 139 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.856 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.244 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.308 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.812 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.974 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.661 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5

can you point out what is the best thing in this letter due to what I got this score? I want to understand the strong side to be consistent.