you are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like
say what experience and skills you have
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Sana, and I am writing to you in connection with recent job advert your firm placed in"Job Bank Magazine" last Wednesday. I am very much interested in with your renown company followed by expanding and polishing my skills.
I hold a Masters degree in field of Pharmacology from Kingston University, London. Hence, would love to serve in your organisation on the post of pharmacologist. Due to my postgraduate degree classes I would certainly prefer a morning 10-12 hour duration job. So that, I shall polish my present skills and expand my knowledge and expertise.
tail
I currently possess a 5 year experience, specifically 3 years as hospital pharmacist and 2 years as a retail pharmacist. I have strong expertise in preparing total parenteral nutrition fluid following command on compounding and dispensing. Furthermore, I have received special training in dose calculations and adjustments in all age group patients. In addition, I have received many work appreciations with certificates and salary hikes.
I have attached my curriculum vitae with this letter for your reference. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sana Khalid.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tail
...nd expand my knowledge and expertise. tail I currently possess a 5 year experi...
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Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xpand my knowledge and expertise. tail I currently possess a 5 year experience,...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46276595745 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28915715282 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.718085106383 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.229166628 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147436208102 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467626994692 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578524229105 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956271455666 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070045432164 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.