You are a regular customer at a supermarket in your town city You have recently noticed a problem with some of the products that you usually buy and you have decided to complain about this Write a letter to the manager In your letter Explain who you are D

Essay topics:

You are a regular customer at a supermarket in your town/city. You have recently noticed a problem with some of the products that you usually buy and you have decided to complain about this.

Write a letter to the manager. In your letter

Explain who you are
Describe your complaint
Say what you think should be done about it.

Dear Manager,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction based on the recent items purchases from the newyork supermarket on the 20th Jan 2017.

Firstly, being a patron of this supermarket, I always prefer to buy all the necessary items from here, Until the product I recently purchased on 20th January turned out to be a complete disaster for me.

Secondly, I bought some accessories for my laptop and mobile phone from your store. Upon unboxing, I found them they are defective because I can't hear the sound from the earphones and the charger proved to be useless because of its inability to charge my laptop.

Thirdly, I expect you to either kindly replace the defective products or compensate me for the same. I would advise you to repeal and replace the defective items to avoid any unavoidable circumstances in the future.

Best
Faizal

Votes
Average: 6.8 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...found them they are defective because I cant hear the sound from the earphones and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 146.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97260273973 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77139233962 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671232876712 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7542586647 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 4.34317383033 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155979651241 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066216964873 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048251687203 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825203651273 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470632754687 0.0580467560999 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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