You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:explain why you want to take time off workgive details of the amount of time you needsuggest how your

Dear Jason,

Hope this letter finds you in good health. As you may be aware, I am staying with my elderly in-laws who are above the age of 60. They need some medical assistance due to ailment. My father-in-law has been hospitalized for physiotherapy treatment and I ought to take care of them in this critical situation. I would like to take some time-off for about a month. I need to be at hospital for couple of weeks followed by taking care of them at home for another 2 weeks. As you always say, work life balance is essential hence it is vital to be with them for 4 weeks.

Please be informed that I have sorted out few plans to accomplish my work when I am on my planned leaves. I have given the knowledge transition to my teammates and they are confident to do my tasks. I don’t have any pending task. Since we have a strong team co-ordination, team is supportive and they will take care any tasks that would be assigned to me. I hope to return back to work by 1st of October. I am reachable through phone. Whenever time permits, I can work from home. Feel free to text or call me if you need anything in priority.

Thanks,
Chitra

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...that would be assigned to me. I hope to return back to work by 1st of October. I am reachab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35185185185 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57060784472 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7175770185 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217613987969 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691504572429 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666621062693 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170807917744 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075332487725 0.0580467560999 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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