You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:explain why you want to take time off workgive details of the amount of time you needsuggest how your

Essay topics:

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

Dear Mr. Eastwood,

I’m writing to ask for taking one week off from my work. As you know, I’ve been preparing for my PhD in Surveying for a long time and it’s very important to me.

Now I need some time to finish my preparation, visit my tutor and finally, pass my exam. In my opinion, our new employee Jack will able to cover my duties, while I’m busy with my studying. He did a good progress on his current position and I have already given him all instructions he needed to succeed in my job.

I would appreciate you providing me with one week unpaid, while I’m absent. My position in your company is very important for me and I look forward for collaborating with you in future. Moreover, I want to discuss with you some improvements I want to provide in our manufacturing when I complete my education process.

In any case, I will be in touch for all week I absent. My university is located in Ukraine, but If there is an emergency, call me on my Viber number whenever you need.

Thank you in advance for considering my situation.

Your sincerely,

Max Gordon

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good progress'.
Suggestion: good progress
... I'm busy with my studying. He did a good progress on his current position and I have alre...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...look forward for collaborating with you in future. Moreover, I want to discuss with you s...
^^^^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'you know', 'in any case', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.191666666667 0.220444632235 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.145833333333 0.167888034529 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0416666666667 0.0606518309736 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0333333333333 0.0506257000042 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.191666666667 0.118615021944 162% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.107062808482 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0375 0.041066498444 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76237293248 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0291666666667 0.0385302599488 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0333333333333 0.0714148451538 47% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0125 0.0191574576366 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00833333333333 0.00930345855455 90% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1108.0 1141.60824742 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.134020619 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62436548223 5.53046319177 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.279187817259 0.284621296913 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253807106599 0.211203875043 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177664974619 0.133321485273 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111675126904 0.0843313296314 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76237293248 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609137055838 0.622163163488 98% => OK
Word variations: 58.9094994452 62.8969750728 94% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4166666667 16.4300151701 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8676478633 44.7399317507 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 90.9928171075 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.4300151701 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.613754768223 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 41.7973773266 37.5504026743 111% => OK
Elegance: 0.955056179775 1.13073093955 84% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268568747864 0.331212695627 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0824695619063 0.0927372745006 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0555061063403 0.0736520305886 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.666221504764 0.579516596996 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144366112146 0.180689518051 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116034383296 0.122183219658 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589283004684 0.0765303033291 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260748426133 0.211926503985 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0119702476858 0.0737400523855 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160841182501 0.203819188451 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719236071099 0.067151250289 107% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 8.32989690722 72% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.