You find that your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses. Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund.
Dear Mr. Johns
My name is Max Gordon, I enrolled on the courses provided by the local school of architect where you working. I am a Ukrainian citizen and English is not my native language. My studying program started two weeks ago. There are 5 main fields of studying and two of them are quite difficult for me. As I said, I am originally from Ukraine and this is the first time of my studying abroad. In spite of the fact, that I obtained high score in English test, it still problematically to comprehend the information, which I receive during the lectures from our tutors. I think, that the best solution of this problem is halting my History and Economics courses in order to complete Math, Physics and Chemistry. And I will get back to study those two subjects, when I improve my ability to understand English speech fluently.
If it is possible, I want to ask you to let me continue the studying without two mentioned courses and refund my studying fees for them. I have a same credit card, which I used to pay before the courses have started and would be very pleased, if you refund money on this card.
Thank you in advance for considering my problem, I hope I will able to continue my studying with the desirable conditions and look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours sincerely,
Max Gordon
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, still, i think, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57203389831 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59309224786 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597457627119 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2973969083 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9166666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184979681745 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695832590892 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482224538895 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129267535097 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218074179498 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.