Dear Mr,
I am X one of constant costumer of your products. I am writing this letter with regard to the problem with my cellphone, I had purchased form your representative store located in the S Street recently.
Three days subsequent to the day I have bought my mobile, I was downloading some application from internet that it unexpectedly crashed and turned off. So I unified my efforts to restart it, but I unfortunately couldn’t. Not only didn’t it start working, but the temperature of its battery went extremely high.
Hence, I have confined this issue with your representative shop and he firmly promised to repair or change it with a new one as soon as possible. Although my cellphone is covered with three years warranty, the store didn’t take any efficient action until now. I would appreciate if you do an immediate action with respect to either replacement or reparation of my mobile since I paid a large amount of money and I am in urgent need of that.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
X
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: SUBSEQUENT_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'after'
Suggestion: after
...in the S Street recently. Three days subsequent to the day I have bought my mobile, I was ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng from you soon. Yours faithfully, X
^^^
Line 13, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom you soon. Yours faithfully, X
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, with regard to, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88461538462 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04802461464 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675824175824 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9055107178 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138880973656 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522940055721 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341405493028 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787954819093 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143209294018 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.