You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter.
1. Introduce yourself
2. Describe your plans for the party
3. invite your neighbour to come
Dear Mr. Perera,
I am Vaishnavi, who is your new neighbour. I have moved to the house next to yours from the 1st February 2017. I am going to live with my husband and two kids. Since we bought this house as a very first property for our family, my husband and I are planning to hold a small party on the 18th February.
We are planning to have it as an outdoor event and our idea is to arrange the seatings at the backyard. Since our kids' classmates are also invited, we will be having a musical chair game before the dinner. The party will start at around 4 pm and end at 7.30 pm. Estimated number of guests is approximately 30 to 35.
Our family cordially invites you along with your wife and kids to attend the get together on Saturday. On top of that, I apologize in advance for any inconveniences cause due to noise resulting from the outdoor event.
Please be good enough to bear with us during those 3 1/2 hours and we would love to see you all on that evening.
Thank you
Yours truly,
Vaishnavi
Comments
Dear Mr Smith,
Dear Mr Smith,
I hope you are doing great. I am Pedram and I have just moved to the house next door of yours. I am writing to let you know that we are planning to throw a party this weekend and we will appreciate your presence at the party. Also, I would like to apologize you for any inconvenience this would make for you and your family.
In fact, this Saturday, the 28th of June, is our wedding anniversary. So I decided to hold a party to celebrate this occasion, and we have invited some of our friends, colleagues, and people we care about. The party supposes to be rather noisy since we have arranged a local music band to play and there are some children who are very likely to make a nuisance. However, the party is not to last after midnight and we have asked all participants to be considerable to the neighbors.
As I regret that we are not acquainted with each other so far, I would like to invite you and your family to the party. In this way, we have a great opportunity to become acquainted as well as spending some quality time and I assure that you will enjoy the party.
I look forward for your response, accepting the invitation. Please also accept my apology for any nuisance in advance.
Yours Sincerely,
Pedram Ghasemi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...xt to yours from the 1st February 2017. I am going to live with my husband and tw...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'end' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'ends'.
Suggestion: ends
...The party will start at around 4 pm and end at 7.30 pm. Estimated number of guests ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34895833333 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37289174519 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4669138408 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5833333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235075944943 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086745814214 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902086627625 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10823435596 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784780977528 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.