You have lost your credit card.Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Essay topics:

You have lost your credit card.
Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter
explain how you lost the card
ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Dear Sir/Madam
I am a long-term credible client of your bank. I am writing in relation to an unpleasant event happening for me, recently and I hope you could help me.
As usual, last night I went shopping to buy some of food and equipment needed for my home in the central supermarket. There was greatly crowded at the cash desk. After the payment, when I was getting home, I realized that my wallet was not there maybe it was stolen. I don't know what did actually happen to it? But, some of my personal document were lost, such as my identity card, membership card, credit card and so on. Even though I came back there and quest any person and places near the supermarket, I could not find anything.
I would like to ask you revoking my old credit card to preserve any feasible misusage if it is possible, and publish a new one for me at your earliest convenience.
I look forward to receiving your reply.

Yours faithfully
Ghazal As

Votes
Average: 8.6 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... recently and I hope you could help me. As usual, last night I went shopping to ...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...et was not there maybe it was stolen. I dont know what did actually happen to it? Bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, may, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50581395349 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52164105442 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691860465116 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1224737977 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4545454545 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225755715847 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069751786298 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823949170892 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125278971617 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584092057295 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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