You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card
Dear Sir/Madam,
In this letter, I am writing to inform you about the disappearance of my student identification card on October 10.
That day, I traveled to many hospitals by bus. My teacher wanted me to collect information for a healthcare presentation. Someone might have stolen it on the bus, while I was talking on the phone. Alternatively, it might have slipped from my pocket, when I was entering the overcrowded public transport.
Anyway, the missing of the card has already negatively affected my university life. First of all, I could not borrow books from the public library, since the librarian demands the presence of ID card. Secondly, I could not purchase clothing, cinema tickets and food with discount, because the salesman needs it to register my number in their account system.
It would be great, if you as the head of student service issued a new card, as in a week I need it for booking a train ticket. I look forward to your reply. You can either send me a message to my email address tolikxxx@mail.ru or phone on the following number.
Yours faithfully,
Tolegen
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95721925134 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93422610955 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68449197861 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8483235393 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23648651517 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786445656026 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743845382433 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140258232244 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951723559449 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.