Dear Sir,
I am a student of your university and I am writing to you to formally complain about the problems that I have recently come across. These problems are making it difficult for me to continue my studies here.
I am a first year student of Hospital Management, it is supposed to be a two year programme. I am a doctor by profession and wish to become an hospital administrator
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...agement, it is supposed to be a two year programme. I am a doctor by profession a...
^^
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...doctor by profession and wish to become an hospital administrator
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 320.0 937.175257732 34% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 71.0 206.0 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50704225352 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.90278310819 3.78020617076 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95734403701 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 50.0 127.690721649 39% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704225352113 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 106.2 290.88556701 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0376910239 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879286750722 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435814884737 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754853523059 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684070023504 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684070023504 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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