Dear John,
Hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to inform you that finally my dreams came true and I was able to leave my old place and move to a new fabulous one.
If you recall, I told you before about the problems I had with that old building. As if all those problems with the pipelines and heating system were not enough, recently a new neighbor had come in who used to practice with his musical instruments throughout the night when I wanted to get some sleep.
Finally I made my mind and moved to this new apartment. It is a two storied building located downtown with a great design of the interior. It has also a spectacular view of the city from its balcony.
Being here alone, I thought maybe I could enjoy your company at this weekend if you could manage your time. Trust me we are going to have a lot of fun. I look forward to be hearing from you soon.
Best Regards
Mehrdad
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ght when I wanted to get some sleep. Finally I made my mind and moved to this new ap...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 168, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to being'.
Suggestion: to being
...ng to have a lot of fun. I look forward to be hearing from you soon. Best Regards ...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 171, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...to have a lot of fun. I look forward to be hearing from you soon. Best Regards Mehrdad...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40828402367 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3101640533 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698224852071 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5996792885 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7272727273 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191866643433 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594449517169 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413461289045 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10106558726 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359920737223 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.