You have seen an advertisement for an evening course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter ask fordetails of the course,ask if the course teachers are qualified native speakers,request that the

Essay topics:

You have seen an advertisement for an evening course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter ask for
details of the course,
ask if the course teachers are qualified native speakers,
request that the institute sends you their brochure.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing with regards to inquire about a French language training available at your institute.

Fortunately, I am on an annual leave and I have ample of time to enhance my skills. Therefore, I would request you to send me details of the topics which will be covered in the course. Also, I will be grateful if you could share payment structure and time slots available for the course.

Moreover, I seek information on tutor’s profile as well because I am interested to join the course only if I am assigned a native French speaker for my tuition.

Since I am naïve to your institute it will better if you could mail me your company portfolio on my email address abc@gmail.com. This will help me to take a decision quickly and also I will be able to recommend you to my other colleagues.
I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Jessica Ayri

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74522292994 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8219507833 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643312101911 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3065414536 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7777777778 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157876434393 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627322513158 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026139349213 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073674139418 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395520901195 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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