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You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job.Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter,. explain that you would like to apply for the job. give some details of any relevant experience that you have. specify th

Essay topics: You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job.

Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter,

. explain that you would like to apply for the job
. give some details of any relevant experience that you have
. specify the days and times that would suit you

FaizalReza's picture

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to you and would like to apply for a part-time job at your restaurant. First of all, I got to know about this wonderful opportunity from one of my friend's who work as a chef in your restaurant.

Secondly, I have worked in the past at KFC and McDonald's as a Relationship Manager. I mainly used to handle customer's queries and complaints and on top of that I gave a one-time weekly presentation on number of cases resolved in a week.

Thirdly, I would be grateful to you if you can allow me to work from Monday to Friday between 9 am to 5 pm excluding public holidays.

I look forward to hearing back from you soon.

Your's Faithfully,
FaizalReza

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, first of all, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 577.0 937.175257732 62% => OK
No of words: 129.0 206.0 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47286821705 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79424838714 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68992248062 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 172.8 290.88556701 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8776141584 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4285714286 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 4.34317383033 273% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237983885111 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990744693521 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103290497417 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124278905653 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684658931979 0.0580467560999 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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