You recently stayed in a hotel in an English-speaking country. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite poor.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter• give details of what

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You recently stayed in a hotel in an English-speaking country. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite poor.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
• give details of what was wrong
• explain what you had to do to overcome the problem
• say what action you would like the manager to take.

Dear Sir/Madam
I was a guest at your hotel from Jan. 07 to Jan. 15. I am writing to complain about poor service at your hotel.
There was not adequate ventilator in my room that I was not being able to breathe easily and caused me some skin disease. Not only there was not any suitable fan, but also the heating/cooling system was disastrous. Despite the unexpected strange weather for that time of the year and necessity of keeping the rooms well-conditioned, the hotel conditioning system didn't work properly and it was just deafening. Furthermore, of the icy weather and lack of appropriate heating system functionality, I had to wear several clothes altogether, so I could not sleep comfortably through the night of terrible condition.
Indeed, the hotel facilities were destitute.
I would very much appreciate your assisting at your earliest convenience. Maybe it would be better to give me back the half pay.
I look forward to receiving your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Ghazal

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ditioned, the hotel conditioning system didnt work properly and it was just deafening...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, may, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06097560976 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04015854028 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.3721782955 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1666666667 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321475906146 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985770863424 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673089461566 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136165307567 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793473798197 0.0580467560999 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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