You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged.Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letterTell them why you need to move the interview timeAsk to change the interview da

Essay topics:

You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged.
Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter
Tell them why you need to move the interview time
Ask to change the interview date
Explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to let you know that I was expected to arrive on the 22nd of January 2017 for an interview scheduled in your organization.

Firstly, I would like to offer my sincere apologies in case of any inconvenience caused. I was supposed to reach to your office at 10 a.m on 22nd January 2017 but due to the heavy traffic, it almost became impossible to reach to your organization on time.

Secondly, I would appreciate if you can kindly change the interview date to 18th February 2017, as that would help me to plan the things in advance for my interview and can even help me to score better in interview.

Thirdly, the position for which I have applied at your organization is the one for which I was eagerly for the past 6 months and this can help me to hone my skills and facilitate growth in my career.

I look forward to hearing back from you soon.

Best,
FaizalReza

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50295857988 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60833342236 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2532394585 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 16.8248392259 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 4.34317383033 295% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193659938223 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805303006 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781794652352 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11420917381 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751070934636 0.0580467560999 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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