You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- ask them for help finding an accommodation
- tell them where you would like to live
- tell them the type of place you are looking for
Write at least 150 words.
Dear John,
Hope everything is going good from your end. It’s been a very long time meeting you. I am moving to the place Toronto based on my work in the mid of next month. Feeling very excited that I will be meeting you after many years. I am writing this to let you know about my change in place and I need your help to find accommodation.
My company is providing a studio apartment for 2 weeks after arriving. If, it is posible want to take a house near to my office location in downtown. It would be better if you can find it near suburb and marketing place. Accordingly, it would be happy if it is spacious. My budget is around $1200 if it’s an apartment. I do not mind even to share a room with someone. However, if it is sharing then half of it is my budget. Hope you can find a place for me within my economic range as you have a wide circle in your area.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thanking you.
Yours friendly,
Abc.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, Hope everything is going good from your ...
^^^
Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I need your help to find accommodation. My company is providing a studio apartme...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o apartment for 2 weeks after arriving. If, it is posible want to take a house nea...
^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou soon. Thanking you. Yours friendly, Abc.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, look, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18378378378 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33031283855 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632432432432 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2617577797 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.6 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3333333333 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291820645166 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922352037363 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797948184294 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204246942968 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219342980519 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 8.37731958763 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.08 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.