Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, you should give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre; you should explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community; you should describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I was informed by my friend that the local council intends to close the sports and entertainment centre in this local area. I am writing this letter to suggest you to cancel this plan.
My friends and I play sports and participate in a variety of leisure activities in this centre frequently. For instance, I prefer to play badminton while my friends are likely to go to the gym on weekends. It is unquestionable that this centre plays an important role in mitigating our pressure and recharging our batteries.
The centre is also crucial to numerous local residents. First of all, it is the only leisure place in this area. People will have to travel a long distance to the urbane area to do leisure activities if the centre closes. In addition, the local residents also consider the centre as an indispensable part of the cultural legacy in this area, as it has been existed for many years.
If the centre is shut down, this will result in a frenzy of all local residents, as your action may severely interfere with our lives. As a consequence, the local people will never find out any other close and comfortable counterparts where they can spend time on leisure activities.
I hope that my suggestions will be of some assistance.
Your sincerely,
David Villa.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 225 250
No. of Characters: 1031 1200
No. of Different Words: 134 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.873 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.582 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.669 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.149 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.315 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.733 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.063 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76563032799 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582222222222 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8094141593 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3076923077 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217028733322 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755904967467 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523394202656 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104838179932 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788650455286 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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