Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
give details of when you would be available for this work
Dear Madam;
Good day, I'm Earl John A. Navarrete, one of registered nurse in this hospital. I am 23 years old and I am serving here almost 2 years.
In line of my request for unpaid work. The reason about is that I want to serve and guide all the patients for their convinience in our hospital. I want to help people in terms of guiding them for my free time.
Help and serve patients for their safety. Thank
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Madam; Good day, Im Earl John A. Navarrete, one of register...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 343.0 937.175257732 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 79.0 206.0 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3417721519 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.9813075013 3.78020617076 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24867993465 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 56.0 127.690721649 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708860759494 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 99.9 290.88556701 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.98608094 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.0 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2857142857 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 4.34317383033 7% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132011524748 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635113959151 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575098894604 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777527620072 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579827063137 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.71 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 11.0 41.2886597938 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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