Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter.Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
.Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
.give details of when you would be available for the work
Dear sir,
I’m contacting you with regards of potential job opportunity that is advertised by you on the hospital’s website for a volunteer to help you with some duties. As a person, I’m thriving on challenge to help people in difficult situations. I have recently read an article in the local newspaper about lack of working staff in hospitals and I realized that common people have to do something with that. People’s health is more expansive than money, thus, I’m ready to work for free. Moreover, I have some skills that could be helpful.
Firstly, I have a valid driver license, if you need a driver for an ambulance. Secondly, I can take care of any of your medical equipment, because I have a relevant experience in that. By the way, I can help you.
Currently, I have a position of welder in the local factory. My work schedule is flexible, so I think I have enough time to spend in hospital. I’m free on Saturdays and Sundays. On Thursdays, Fridays I’m free after 1 p.m. I’m looking forward to hearing back from you.
Kind regards
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I'm contacting you with regards of ...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: OF_ANY_OF[1]
Message: Consider simply using 'of' instead.
Suggestion: of
...an ambulance. Secondly, I can take care of any of your medical equipment, because I have ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'i think', 'by the way']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213991769547 0.220444632235 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.123456790123 0.167888034529 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0658436213992 0.0606518309736 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0329218106996 0.0506257000042 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0987654320988 0.118615021944 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131687242798 0.107062808482 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0288065843621 0.041066498444 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85057799219 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0246913580247 0.0385302599488 64% => OK
Particles: 0.00411522633745 0.00132118243153 311% => OK
Determiners: 0.0699588477366 0.0714148451538 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0123456790123 0.0191574576366 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0082304526749 0.00930345855455 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1093.0 1141.60824742 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.134020619 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87634408602 5.53046319177 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78085437643 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344086021505 0.284621296913 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.290322580645 0.211203875043 137% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.220430107527 0.133321485273 165% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129032258065 0.0843313296314 153% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85057799219 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618279569892 0.622163163488 99% => OK
Word variations: 59.370725481 62.8969750728 94% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.3076923077 16.4300151701 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2427349164 44.7399317507 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0769230769 90.9928171075 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.4300151701 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.613754768223 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 43.3399503722 37.5504026743 115% => OK
Elegance: 1.46774193548 1.13073093955 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288721289874 0.331212695627 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0774137103768 0.0927372745006 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0740282431007 0.0736520305886 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.466379399449 0.579516596996 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0979666426462 0.180689518051 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979434331671 0.122183219658 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065886243024 0.0765303033291 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.172508304463 0.211926503985 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0475734038254 0.0737400523855 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19687364258 0.203819188451 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634913569956 0.067151250289 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.45360824742 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 4.73195876289 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.