Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir,
I came to know about the award that your newspaper is planning to give from your today's edition. I really appreciate your effort to recognize contributions from ordinary people around us. As requested in the paper, I am proposing the name of Ms. Sujata Ghimire, a local teacher at government school, who is trained to teach students with disability from our community.
Ms. Ghimire teaches mathematics to blind students during the weekdays and on weekends, she trains young girls at nearby college on the techniques of self defense. The parents from nearby villages are extremely satisfied to see that Ms. Sujata has been able to inculcate good manner and discipline among the young children.
In my view, Ms. Sujata can either be given a certificate with some cash amount or if it is possible, you may explore the options of buying some equipment for her class. In the last parents' meeting, she was concerned that she does not have the latest and newest tools to cater to the needs of her students, so, it is really a great idea if you could assist her.
I sincerely hope that you will consider Ms. Sujata suitable for this prize.
Yours faithfully,
Robin Hood
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91625615764 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54000962826 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679802955665 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1900610187 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.888888889 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139220228595 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595672179334 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537826716454 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698496483953 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643168308372 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.