Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
Explain the reasons for the noise.
Apologize
Describe what action you will take.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to apologize for the noise that has been disturbing you since I had moved in.
I rent a flat on the fifth flour right above your apartments. Today I was informed by my landlord that there is a complaint on me from you. From your letter I learnt that you can hear how I, my spouse and the child running, walking and moving furniture above you.
I deeply apologize for the inconvenience caused. I had no knowledge that my family has been so troublesome for you. I would like to reassure you that I will do whatever it takes to address the problem effectively and quickly.
This morning I went to a local department store and purchased several thick rugs that will be put in the main rooms. To make a right choice I consulted with a store managed who guaranteed that those mats will not let any noise in your home. The delivery is scheduled on tomorrow afternoon. My family will be extremely careful not to disturb you till the bought rugs arrive.
Once again, please accept my apologies.
Sincerely yours,
Mr. Dubinchuk
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Better not to passive voice a lot. When it is possible to use active voice, don't use passive voice. for example:
Today I was informed by my landlord that there is a complaint on me from you. From your letter I learnt that you can hear
advised:
Today my landlord informed me with a complaint letter from which you can hear....
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 190 250
No. of Characters: 835 1200
No. of Different Words: 122 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.713 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.395 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.504 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.534 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.067 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.726 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.158 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 8 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...family has been so troublesome for you. I would like to reassure you that I will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64210526316 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5520400834 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8494981522 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8461538462 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 4.34317383033 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261714430523 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760757327095 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645107113497 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121355633719 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799199078191 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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