Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well What problems will your country face in the next ten years How can these problems be overcome

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Nowadays, there is a plethora of problems that have been arising worldwide such as, population, environment and education related issues. Counties around the globe will be tolerating a number of challenges like rising numbers in human, nature problems and education. Here I will discuss some problems that is facing in next decade.
To begin with, Firstly, Environmental issues can be growing day by day because of the use of a number of personal vehicles. Secondly, people are now aware from the advantages of save the environment and in the result, in next decade may have a higher chances of declining in carbon dioxide because of the trees are cut by a human. Thirdly, if we cut greenery then our nature would be probably disappearing in the next decade.
Moving Further, Talking about education, so in many countries education fees are too much that we can’t expect and due to this poor students are not able to teach a satisfactory education and in result they may have to drop the study and doing some unnecessary work. Coming From population, in next decade population would be the greatest problem because the competition will be go as higher and competitive world means toughest world.
Now, I will discuss about how these problems are overcome. We have to use public transport rather than using a personal vehicle. To doing this, pollution will be in control and also the environment is clear. For education, the Government should take care of poor people and they may help to reach a goal. Also, the government can organize a camp to aware of environmental issue.
In the Conclusion, from all the aforementioned points, I hold my view that to take some major steps by the government and also from the human side, it may help to control these problems.

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Average: 8 (7 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, such as, talking about, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8803986711 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75196583696 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548172757475 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2879569657 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30867278024 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104259124735 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862741341184 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159376758114 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103018322365 0.056905535591 181% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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