Painting, music and many other kinds of arts are today popular in the whole world. The minority of people reckon that the high authorities should provide a huge amount of funds for public services rather than arts activities. However, I am completely disagree with this statement, this essay will
explain the reason of my being disagree.
To begin with, funds are crucial for run the each and every activity in this era. Although the government allocate a huge amount of money to each sector,
some people think that providing funds for music and painting activities are just a wastage of money. Arts activities bring a lot of benefits which is extremely fruitful for nations as well as for those people how involved in these activities. One of the major benefits is that, if government allocate more funds in order to the art they will give a great platform to those people who want to improve their art skills and show their talent in the whole world. Secondly, through the painting, music and other arts people represent their culture in other countries. Take India as an example, over the few decades, numerous Indian artists represent the Indian culture in the whole world with the help of music and many other arts. The government of India give the financial supports as well as another benefit. Thus, they encourage the artists and do their better in this field. According to my perception, the council should be given financial support to artists and arts because it will be fruitful in order to improve the talent of artists.
Furthermore, if high authorities give the funds for arts, so artists also take a part in the international competitions and when they won those competitions they receive extremely huge prizes such as prices money and more work opportunities. As a consequence, financial benefits are received by the nation. For instance, the artists who participate in the international competitions, if they won it they also represent their country on the international level and other benefits is that they receive the prize money in that money government also get the huge amount of tax which fruitful for the economy. Last and but not least benefit is that artists get work opportunities which improve the employment ratio of the country. When the government support the another artist they received these kinds of benefits.
To conclude, arts play a crucial role in order to the nation alongside in the life of artists. the high authority of the nation should be given more funds to arts because it represents our nation the globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as for, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96751740139 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63798676375 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436194895592 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6290844028 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.684210526 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6842105263 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236216786488 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742389640661 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496113020333 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120942496414 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732677290264 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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