It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they turn 30, as this is best both for the individual and for the society. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often said that people should be inspired to create family before their third decade of their life. Because it is best for both sides, themselves and community. However, It would be totally wrong because of the society we are living in nowadays which has many problems, such as economical, educational, some other issues in families, also the maturity is not determined by that age at all.
This topic has few benefits, such as creating their own family and they can stand on their own feet and have their children. Another positive point is that when they get married in younger ages, they have lower expectations compared to the time they become older.
on the other hand, the biggest demerit is that they are faced with enormous financial problems that even older adults are not able to deal with, let alone younger ones could not effort, let alone youngers. For example, the cost of living such as food, rent, car, clothes, medicines increases sharply day by day and with a meager salary maybe they could pay for their food and nothing more, under this circumstances they could never said that which age they could get marry.
Second reason that could be mentioned is maturity, these days society is full of immature people that do not know how to treat their wife or husband and it has some problems in educational roots. For instance, your school which is like your second home does not teach this kind of things that how you live how to treat and just your scores are important for them. now the society has problem. In addition, they faced with some problem in their family. For example, they parents do not help them or do not teach them way of life, by the way school and home are complementing each other.
Another point that again refers to maturity is commitment, nowadays the number of divorces are increasing, one reason is that couples are not loyal to each other, in so many cases they cheat on each other.
In conclusion, marriage is not depending on age and it is completely match with maturity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... for their food and nothing more, under this circumstances they could never said tha...
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...t could be mentioned is maturity, these days society is full of immature people that...
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...blem in their family. For example, they parents do not help them or do not teach them w...
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...so many cases they cheat on each other. In conclusion, marriage is not depending...
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Suggestion: matched
...t depending on age and it is completely match with maturity.
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...d it is completely match with maturity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, second, so, third, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70224719101 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30263073888 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533707865169 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5325782801 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249858386483 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082429662867 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561561060071 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102778021333 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715230008383 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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