The levels of youth crimes are increasing rapidly in most cities of the world. What are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions.

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The levels of youth crimes are increasing rapidly in most cities of the world. What are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions.

Submitted by Emmanuel on Fri, 03/27/2015 - 12:49

Nowadays in most cities, it is of n6 doubt that the rates at which youths commit crimes are increasing significantly around the globe. This undisputable fact has gotten to a head. There are plethora reasons for this ill effect trend in the world and measures which can be taken to see that the situation is curtailed. These causes and remedies shall be discussed below in the preceding paragraphs.

First and foremost, it is certain that the major cause of this trend in the world today is poverty. The increase in poverty has brought about a rise in youth crime. Poverty has been the main ro...

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and measures which can be taken to see that the situation is curtailed.
Description: what is the verb for 'measures'?

when they grows, are out of control and can pertake into committing atrocities.
Description: The fragment they grows , is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace grows with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive

Sentence: Nowadays in most cities, it is of n6 doubt that the rates at which youths commit crimes are increasing significantly around the globe.
Error: n6 Suggestion: no

Sentence: This undisputable fact has gotten to a head.
Error: undisputable Suggestion: indisputable

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