Many people believe that university students should pay tuition fees in full themselves, because they gain education for their own benefit and not for the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Higher education is vital for everyone to pursue their career. Some people reckon that university students should pay their entire course fees by themselves because they are studying for their own sake not for the community. I completed disagree that students should pay full fees by themselves.
College students are working hard for their dream career and it will earn high salaries. Status and respect from the society. Paying fees will not be a problem to the student as they can get education loans from the bank after earning they can repay the debt as installment, which can be a small proportion of their salary. Furthermore, the government cannot subsidize full tuition fees of the student as it has to concentrate basic needs like food, shelter and clothing.
On the other hand, poor students cannot pay full tuition fees as it is expensive, which will deter young people from going to the university. Moreover, all the profession from doctor to engineer has indirectly contributed to the society through their service, donation, to the charity or needy people. So the government should provide scholarships, education loan and other benefits should be provided for the deserving students. They have invested time and effort into gaining their qualifications. In addition, they have the knowledge, training and skill for the important jobs. They are the asset to the society so they have to be given high priority in education.
In a nutshell, university students are the future generation of the society and their contribution to the communal activities are remarkable. The tuition fees should not be a burden of pursuing higher education. Government and educational institution should take steps to reduce or sponsor tuition fees for the student.
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It is obviously observed…
It is obviously observed that pupils should spend money on their full tuition. Although it can be argued that higher education brings more advantages to individuals rather than society, I still believe this situation can affect us negatively.
On the one hand, it is true to say that when students have to pay many expenses, it will rob them of a lot of their learning opportunities, especially for poor but gifted students. If these students were sponsored by the government in terms of financial aids, they would equip with their knowledge and skills which brings many benefits to the community in developing countries. For instance, with the aim of meeting the demand of society, students being involved in fields such as science, chemistry, medicine, and education need to be trained intensively and extensively so that the funding from the government will be used for a long time purposes.
On the other hand, the cost of students’ studies puts them under a financial burden, because all funds are being paid for themselves. It is undeniable that some poor pupils have to do part-time jobs after school or at the weekend in order to earn enough money to serve both their daily activities and tuition at the university. Consequently, their financial burdens tend to lessen their time and efforts on class performance which is undoubtedly worse during this time.
In conclusion, while some people agree with this, I am against the opinion that students should pay the full education fees for themselves. The government spending on tuition will not only benefit students individually but also socially in the long-term period.
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