Parents are the best teacher. Do you agree or disagree?
Parents are the best teachers in the world. Although this is never ending debate topic. I agree with this statement. I strongly believe in parents as teachers. No one can find better teacher than parents. Only they can create the foundation of children's life.
Before puting further argument, I should define "Teacher". Literal meaning of the teach is the one who teaches. Responsblities of teacher not only includes teaching subject related knowledge, but also includes preparing a good human being. teaching discipline, moral values of life, spiritual teaching etc. Teacher is responsible for overall development of children.
For a teacher in any school, institute or organization is not able to develop a child into good human being. No organization can ensure overall development of children. Specially in recent era, when education has become business for most of the organization and teachers, the only ray of hope is "Parents".
A child follows his parents starting from his first sight in this world. Children immitate their parents. This is the main argument behind parents being the best teachers. Parents can each not only discipline and moral values of life, but can also teach spiritual science. They give knowledge to their children by their life long experience. They can build thinking and analytical abilities in their children. Ofcource, parents with higher education can give more knowledge to their children compare to less educated parents. But the abilities and teachings required from parents are not dependent on education of parents. Parents know their child from the birth and they know their strengths and weakness. So that they can help them to overcome the weakness.
At early age of children, parents teach the children how to walk , run , sit, eat, think etc. They teach them manners of society. In school they help them with their core studies. And further they heir children to choose right path of career. Parents have special bonding with their children than any other person in the world. Due to this bonding children trust their parents the most. This relationship of love, trust and bonding makes parents the best teacher.
Some research shows that of the criminals are orphan. Parents make their children to differentiate between good and bad, between sin and virtues.
So parents are the best teachers who not only contribute to their children but also to the society and world. I strongly agree with out national hero "Bapu" - Mahatma Gandhi- that "Home is the university and parents are the teachers."
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.284482758621 0.247107548796 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.135775862069 0.15552993741 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0818965517241 0.0946569551029 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0625 0.0437536398559 143% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10775862069 0.122223957237 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0280172413793 0.0403219363162 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56338885147 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0237068965517 0.0326786765898 73% => OK
Particles: 0.00215517241379 0.00163938923432 131% => OK
Determiners: 0.0775862068966 0.0861751148067 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0193965517241 0.0214082191602 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00862068965517 0.0119246538136 72% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2553.0 1933.38276553 132% => OK
No of words: 415.0 316.052104208 131% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13701923077 6.10592293882 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20519365927 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378313253012 0.37474360046 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.318072289157 0.284197041944 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212048192771 0.203843217982 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113253012048 0.137313986986 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56338885147 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474698795181 0.560935902166 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.7294280051 60.7401812628 85% => OK
How many sentences: 35.0 16.0911823647 218% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.8571428571 20.7725350517 57% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0763681586 49.5273876611 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.566666667 93.4120437189 213% => Too many chars per sentence.
Words per sentence: 32.2777777778 15.2821509519 211% => Too many words per sentence.
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.594174754866 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.39078156313 159% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01102204409 180% => OK
Readability: 43.6643717728 49.1922392462 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.74107142857 1.69127372897 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.256866286545 0.332604825255 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102125687116 0.102734651613 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0884952568636 0.0668474354756 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.451342231648 0.534917948617 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130346197124 0.148666948902 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857490509988 0.13441755203 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793419241047 0.0742828286743 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.28637257227 0.324241079732 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0980002228396 0.0640056729886 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164088378909 0.22793763319 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068026047342 0.0582452615562 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 8.68436873747 242% => Too many positive sentences.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.41883767535 263% => Too many neutral sentences.
Positive topic words: 16.0 5.88977955912 272% => Too many positive topic words.
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.60220440882 38% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.00200400802 300% => Too many neutral topic words.
Total topic words: 23.0 10.493987976 219% => Too many topic words.
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Rates: 73.6842105263 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9