Some people are of the opinion that police officers should not carry guns in public as this might create a more violent society. They believe that a society without guns is more peaceful.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
You should write at least 250 words .
Many policemen nowadays carry a gun in their holsters while patrolling the streets. There are people who shudder at the sight of these firearms, and believe that the world will be a less violent place if the police didn’t carry such weapons – a belief which I strongly disagree with.
First, guns are the policemen’s first line of defence when the crime situations spiral out of control and results in a gunfight. Without their guns, these law enforcers wouldn’t be able to protect themselves. Needless to say, they won’t be able to protect us as well. In addition, these guns help to det...
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sir what can i do to improve
sir what can i do to improve this task
You may put one more
You may put one more paragraph to get 8.0. Look:
No. of Words: 273 350
No. of Different Words: 152 200
but according to Ielts i
but according to Ielts i think 250 words are enough
250 words are the minimum.
250 words are the minimum. You can put as much as you can.
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 273 350
No. of Characters: 1271 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.065 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.656 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.375 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 79 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.182 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.562 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.11 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5