Some people say that in order to be happy you must have a job you love doing Others say that other factors are more important Do you think that people can only be happy if they have a job they really enjoy Give reasons for your answer and include any rele

In this over competitive world, there is no doubt that people tend to spend more time being in the workplace causing an increase in the number of people claimed that occupitation plays a vital role in the way of becoming happy. Otherwise, the others evaluated other factors much more important. This essay will explain two statements as well as show my viewpoint.

Based on the recent research, those who work in passion will stand a high probability to produce the best products which lead to pay rise or even promotion, thus, being happy when they are at their best is the first reason. In the same way, productive workers tend to be noticed by the big boss, the promising customers and their colleagues, as a result, indulging in a plethora of compliments do flatter their ego.

On the contrary, many people believe family is the top factor in the list of making them happy due to many reasons. It is indispensable that family is home. Although This is not a luxury accommodation with the up-to-date devices, family is where they not only come after a strenuous day of being caught up in fast-paced life but also provide peace and love that can be found nowhere.

Taking everything into consideration, apart from admirable occupitation, family, friends and many other things are able to thrill us.In my mind, I would decline to support the statement mentioned above as the merits just outweighed the demerits.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, well, apart from, no doubt, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76859504132 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58392365023 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665289256198 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 242.0 20.2975951904 1192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1154.0 106.682146367 1082% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 242.0 20.7667163134 1165% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 117.0 7.06120827912 1657% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211145244531 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211145244531 0.084324248473 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107710701974 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541272227333 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 122.0 13.0946893788 932% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -165.69 50.2224549098 -330% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 96.5 11.3001002004 854% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.87 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.42 8.58950901804 226% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 98.8 10.1190380762 976% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 122.0 10.7795591182 1132% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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