These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
As an olden prejudice, women always took on the role of a housewife who spent most of their time taking care of children and doing chores. However, prejudice is gradually vanishing due to several reasons. Nowadays, there is an expanding number of fathers who are willing to stay at home, look after their offsprings and let their wives get to business. In my opinion, this is a positive development.
In recent years, gender equality is strongly supported worldwide and it opens a wide range of opportunities for the women to build themselves a stable career and even become the primary breadwinner in the family. Nevertheless, the larger the amount of time women devote to work, the less time they can spend at home for their children. In those cases, more fathers tend to make a sacrifice to resign their job and stay at home bringing up their offsprings with adroitness. Furthermore, people are now more open to that actual situation, therefore, those fathers can gain more social support for their decision.
From my perspective, this trend has various positive effects on different aspects. With regard to the youngsters, while between them and their mother has already formed a strong bond, the time father stays at home can help him establish a more close-knit relationship with their children. The father’s parental style also has a profound influence on a child’s physical and behavioral development as well as the children, especially the male, who will grow up with greater empathy and an open mind about the gender roles in society. Moreover, the mother can reduce childcare stress and have more opportunities to chasing their career and gain achievements regardless of the historical stereotype.
In conclusion, the gender equality trend in modern life helps the stay-at-home dad receive more social supports and that decision is a positive development with plenty of advantages which not only for the parents but also for their children.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.121875 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80824504529 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0764386728 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.076923077 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322295938716 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11138299452 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634428598112 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203734034559 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0043072870451 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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