7. Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a great concern about the situation that people tend to read news on the Internet. But someone think that newspapers may still the most significant source of news. From my own perspective, I completely disagree with this opinion.
On the one hand, during the booming of technologies, people do not have enough time to read news on the newspaper at the moment, they have a trend that reading news on the internet. The simple reason that there are several benefits of reading news on the internet. Firstly, news on the internet is up-to-minute. It updates at really time. As long as I have my smart phone or laptop with me, I can connect almost website on the internet and access the news of my choice across global. Secondly, many people nowadays have smart phone or laptop and they can surf the internet everywhere if they have network connections. For example, when they go to school by bus, they can use their smart phone and go to news website and check tidings everywhere.
On the other hand, newspaper has more demerits that why people are not choose newspaper to update information. The first reason that the cost of newspaper is higher than reading news on the internet. For example, you used $8 to buy a newspaper, but if you have a smart phone which has network connections, you can read news and you do not pay for a newspaper. While, reading news on the internet is a way to protecting environment. We can save paper which use to print newspaper. It exactly saves forests employ to produce paper.
In conclusion, I think that newspaper will continue to decline importance, and more and more people will use the Internet to access the news
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
... read news on the Internet. But someone think that newspapers may still the most sign...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s on the internet. For example, you used to buy a newspaper, but if you have a sm...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ews and you do not pay for a newspaper. While, reading news on the internet is a way ...
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Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ng environment. We can save paper which use to print newspaper. It exactly saves fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70307167235 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60754873725 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484641638225 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2746119743 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0588235294 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429109609329 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143249590797 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106639581833 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294973878327 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609474744006 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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