Advantages and disadvantes of advertising
It is unquestionable that we see advertisements everywhere from television commercials to billboards. It is thought by some that advertising has some benefits. While others believe that commercials have some detrimental effects on society, I agree with the formal statements that there are tremendous advantages of advertisements.
The most obvious advantage of advertisement is that people gain insight of products and services by the daily exposures of advertisements. For example, visual adverts can provide parents to choose what is good for their children with updated information about milk products, helping them to have better choice for their infants. Another noticeable benefit is that advertisement could maximize the gain of customers by creating the competition between companies. For example, customers watch advertises and get opportunity to compare the products, would compel to companies refine their goods and offers high qualities with reasonable price. Thus, we can see that this brings financial benefits to buyers.
There are various benefits of advertisement, but we can not ignore the drawbacks of advertisements. Sometime advertisers manipulate and play with thought process of customers in order to maximize the profits. For instance, advertising companies try to target young generations, as they know that youth can inspires easily with commercials. A study have been shown that when people constantly see products on an advertisement, they stimulate to purchase goods without knowing the adverse effects. Moreover, sometime pharmaceutical companies advertise fake and low quality product as a consequence people might get in trouble after using those products and they would have greater risk on their health.
In my opinion, there are some detrimental effects of advertisement, but advantages are more than the disadvantages. Purchaser have become more alert to advertising than before, they know how to do research about products and what is good for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: inspire
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72818791946 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19750765796 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577181208054 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6362021963 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192949666795 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744133473668 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564918241144 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131366493058 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293876641921 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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