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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics: Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

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With the proliferation of contemporary lifestyles comes a wide range of socio-economic dilemmas. Indeed, it is the truth that traditional newspapers will be continued as a major source for using of people in the future. Although newspaper is beneficial to some extents, I totally refute with the statement.

First and foremost, there are several reasons why people are less interested in reading newspaper because it is not suitable for the digital age. Firstly, the traditional newspaper does not compete effectively with the electronic newspaper, which is a modern product that is equipped with a hardware in which it can store a large amount of information. As a result of this, conventional newspaper becomes fewer convenience if I have a demand to read and bring it far lung of my home on each my trip. Secondly, the conventional newspaper could not up to date instantly information at any time of the day, while internet’s newspaper could produce hourly every burning issue to the customers. One particularly good example for this is that an accidental fire happens far distance from my location would take me one day to get the news because of the daily production of the newspapers.

I believe that in spite of numerous drawbacks of these inconveniences, the production from traditional newspaper plays a main source that pollutes and courses a serious harm to the environment. With regard to the former, used newspaper could be disposal to the environment system in order to waste not only the natural materials but also the expenditure of the workforce to tackle this issue. To be more specific, producing newspaper has demanded a large amount of manpower in a various procedure of processing system. I addition to this convention newspaper is made by wooden raw- materials, which is produced by logging the wild forest. As a consequence, the deforestation damages significantly the health of the natural world. Therefore, the less using traditional newspaper would be a popular habit for people in the future.

In conclusion, while newspaper will play a main role in the future, I would argue that I disagree with the article.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lifestyles'' or 'lifestyle's'?
Suggestion: lifestyles'; lifestyle's
With the proliferation of contemporary lifestyles comes a wide range of socio-economic di...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., I totally refute with the statement. First and foremost, there are several ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he daily production of the newspapers. I believe that in spite of numerous d...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ular habit for people in the future. In conclusion, while newspaper will play...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13675213675 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11905573807 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558404558405 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3472418097 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181561186873 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574179684738 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377139797183 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108455466588 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0089199399044 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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