Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news. Agree or disagree?
It is quite apparent nowadays that people have tendency to read online news rather than conventional newspaper. While some traditionalists believe that, however real quick e-papers grow, print newspapers absolutely remains its prevalence as the most important source of news; I personally disagree with their points due to some following reasons.
It is undeniable that online news has a lot of advantages. Firstly, it is immediately accessible and convenient. In the fast-paced world, information on online news are always up-to-the-minute, therefore readers are able to keep track of global’s development. Besides, with the aid of advanced technology, readers effortlessly find their required information or news with some simple click of a mouse. Another advantage of e-paper is that it saves a lot money . Since these newspapers are not printed and then there is no need to deliver them, readers have to pay a little amount of money to subscribe to their favorite websites and enjoy the advantages of it.
It is also argued that print newspapers have its own merits, therefore it will remain its highest position as the most important source of news. Undeniably, information published in print media is credible since it is always well-documented. As an added bonus, print media is tangible, therefore readers are able to enjoy the feeling of a warm newspaper right off the press or could use them as a decor in a coffee table. However, conventional newspapers are usually limited in its circulations which sometimes makes readers uncomfortable when they could not pursuit their favourite one. Additionally, to produce a print newspaper, there is a huge need in the amount of wood which is consequently attributable to cut down a lot of trees in the wild environment. On the other hand, online news is now published by credible presses such as New York Times, The Guardian, which costs readers a reasonable price to subscribe and do not destroy forests for wood since there is no need to print.
In conclusion, however the advantages of conventional newspapers is, online newspapers soon become the most important source of information
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase might be redundant. Use simply 'bonus'.
Suggestion: bonus
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24057971014 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11040134792 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542028985507 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7090058548 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.533333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219126007525 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744203646976 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794363495532 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158175231089 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631595631277 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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