It is widely believed that being a superstar- such as a glorious film star or sports legend is valuable as well as complicated. Would it guide to more favour or bring more troubles? Personally, I believe, the benefits outweigh any problems. This essay will discuss both sides with suitable examples.
We must acknowledge that some stars display glamourised bad behaviour that often prove extremely annoying to younger generations. To illustrate, you flip the newspapers, turn on television, will find some idols of youthful taking drugs, excessively drinking alcohol and going through numerous arre...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 765, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ents and live a lavish lifestyle, which wouldnt have been possible without devoting con...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ople. For example, Russel brand, who is a English comedian, actor and activist, h...
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Line 9, column 249, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'motivation'?
Suggestion: motivation
...red people and of course being a direct motivations for teenagers. Therefore, the benefits ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, i mean, in addition, no doubt, of course, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2533632287 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84341091333 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 291.0 176.041082164 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652466367713 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 4.0 0.384769539078 1040% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6508801276 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.15 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164592136142 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424370186374 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568041883376 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942347741772 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081908419356 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 78.4519038076 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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