Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today's modern world, internet is a wonderful tool that helps people to keep in touch wherever we are. Although many people are concerned about the impact that internet have on our daily life.
First, let us consider the benefits the internet brought. Undoubtedly, the greatest of these is the ease with wich it allow us to make contact with people anywhere. The business world makes use of internet every day, companies are able to connect with their costumer and with their supplies from all over the word. Without internet it would be very difficult for some industries to expand their market. In addition, thare are positive aspect of internet that affect our daily lives. For example, my brother went in the USA and he was able to reassure my parents using social network sites such as Skype, Facebook and Twitter.
Secondly, let us consider the disadvantages of using internet. First of all, some people become addicted and spend most of their time surfing the internet or watching TV series. In addition, websites lead to anti-social behaviour in some users and end up with more virtual friends than actual friendship and they become more and more isolated in their homes. Such conditions, in my opinion is not good for their social life as they become less close in relationship with members of their family or with their friends.
In conclusion, I completely agree that, although there are benefit to the internet, there are certain disadvantages. Having said that, I believe that these can be minimise through education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eople to keep in touch wherever we are. Although many people are concerned about the imp...
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...atest of these is the ease with wich it allow us to make contact with people anywhere...
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Suggestion: all over the world
...r costumer and with their supplies from all over the word. Without internet it would be very diff...
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... behaviour in some users and end up with more virtual friends than actual friends...
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Suggestion:
...nefit to the internet, there are certain disadvantages. Having said that, I belie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00778210117 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52107049766 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2387209758 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9285714286 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165791387269 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611710150328 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294109369134 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102565785122 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167060225742 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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