Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary

It often argues that it is more advantageous to get a high wage job, even if it does not appeal to you at all. I completely agree with this opinion and think that earning more money is more important than feeling happy.
First of all, I believe that getting a high salary means the job mission plays a more critical role.
In developing countries where workers are redundant if we can have enough ability to deal with big missions from a company, we can get deserve the amount of money. For example, in Vietnam, a list of hot jobs includes technology, banking, healthy which workers in those areas have a high impact on society, however, they also have huge pressure in their job. Hence, I think a high salary can provide us more challenges to improve ourselves.
Secondly, having a job with a high salary can give us more capability to tackle the problem that happens in a lifetime. our life target is not only being happy but also consider many targets during each life stage such as graduation, married, having a baby, etc. All of those stages need good preparation. For example, one of the biggest worries of each couple after the wedding is to buy a house, if each person gets a high enough wage the couple can reach their purpose quickly and then they will arrange their future target better than ones get a low salary. Thus, the advantages of a high salary job that keep you focusing separately between company mission and daily life mission.
In conclusion, I strongly recommend that a good salary can bring us more challenges, high impact, more money to keep us focusing better on the job that can bring happiness and motivated in the future.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (2 votes)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 94, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'improving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: improving
...h salary can provide us more challenges to improve ourselves. Secondly, having a job wit...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...he problem that happens in a lifetime. our life target is not only being happy but...
^^^
Line 8, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... life stage such as graduation, married, having a baby, etc. All of those stages ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68707482993 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4039511185 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8770972761 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184651295971 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792839807284 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571879533012 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767012395654 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586915517423 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 94, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'improving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: improving
...h salary can provide us more challenges to improve ourselves. Secondly, having a job wit...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...he problem that happens in a lifetime. our life target is not only being happy but...
^^^
Line 8, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... life stage such as graduation, married, having a baby, etc. All of those stages ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68707482993 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4039511185 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8770972761 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184651295971 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792839807284 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571879533012 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767012395654 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586915517423 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.