In the context of the current labor market, it is often believed that choosing a well-paid job can bring much more benefit to people than doing a satisfying work. In this essay, I would like to examine this viewpoint and provide my personal conclusion.
To begin with, it is a matter of fact that earning money is one of the most important purposes in our lives. To be more specific, people who receive high income can certainly have enough financial resource to not only cover their living expenses but also save a lot of money for investing in education or business in the future. Moreover, with surplus income, they can spend a lot of money on taking care of their health, enjoying the high-end entertainment activities or even traveling to various tourist destinations. Those activities are how many people choose to enjoy their lives more better.
However, it should also be borne in mind that job satisfaction plays an important role in an individual life, when people feel happy with their jobs, they can work more efficiently without any force. In particular, doing what you are interested in a specific field can certainly keeps you motivated and leads to your career growth in the future. For example, a lot of researchers, who often receive average wage in many developing countries, try to pursue their career because of their passion about science. Secondly, it is also true that high salary can bring the enjoyment to people in a short term but it cannot maintain our happiness during a long time. That is to say, self- satisfaction is very essential to live in this stressful world, when we are satisfied with the work we do, automatically success, position and money can be achieved, healthy relations are developed at our workplace and our family.
In conclusion, I believe that although money is very necessary in an individual life, it is only one of the many factors that can make us satisfied and bring out our happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...le who receive high income can certainly have enough financial resource to not on...
Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
...many people choose to enjoy their lives more better. However, it should also be borne i...
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'keep'
...ested in a specific field can certainly keeps you motivated and leads to your career ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in particular, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87987987988 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67896819023 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7680034426 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.416666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136802539127 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501484596939 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452328666942 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833492859572 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518956194564 0.056905535591 91% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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