Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned.
Discuss the main arguments for this statement and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people are giving priority to adventurous world. In this situation, some members are of the opinion, exploiting animals for their hobbies such as, games are considered of pride, but others believe it is inhuman activity. In this essay, I will explain the ramifications against animals and human beings who are involved in this activity.
Generally speaking, animals are considered as an objects by humans since the ancient times. They believe the use of animals for their transport and food is their right. Furthermore, animals are also used for the enjoyment in games like bull fights, hunting and many more. One good illustration of this is, bull chase practised in Italy since many years. In this sport participants who are able to complete the race are believed to be courageous, but in due course or the run several participants are injured severely and some have lost life also. Therefore this kind of sport does not add value to the life of any individual. So it is better to be stopped playing life-risking games.
However, people who want to portray their courage to the world, there are games such as wrestling been played. In this game the opponent is of same species and is also aware of the circumstances of the sport. As animals are invulnerable, they do have life and emotions so they should be valued and respect their existence on earth. These blood sports are mainly played by the people who are in need of money so they risk their life in doing so. Government should take major steps in preventing this brutal activity been given importance for fun.
In conclusion, humans have to give importance to their life and should not ruin it because of any life risking hobby. I believe, these blood sports should be banned as they do not do any good for humans or neither animals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an object' or simply 'objects'?
Suggestion: an object; objects
...lly speaking, animals are considered as an objects by humans since the ancient times. They...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt and food is their right. Furthermore, animals are also used for the enjoyment ...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...njured severely and some have lost life also. Therefore this kind of sport does not ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... severely and some have lost life also. Therefore this kind of sport does not add value t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82636655949 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57491832926 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530546623794 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8517018223 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2941176471 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187938674188 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06247889467 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420318689554 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123682157909 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352777858692 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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