Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Being famous should not mean that you give up all right to a private. Although a lot depends on the reason why a person is famous, everyone should be able to enjoy a certain amount of privacy.
I believe it is useful to draw a distinction between those who have sought a career in the public eye and those who have not. Prominent performers in film, television and music, for example, have clear chosen a career path that potentially leads to fame. In fact, for many of them, becoming as widely known as possible is a key ambition. Since they have invited the public to focus their attention on them, they should not be too surprised to find that people are interested in gossip or scandal about their private lives. Public attention is not something that you can turn on and off at will. Having said that, even those who seek fame still deserve the protection of the law and the media should be prevented from harassing them.
Other public figures, on the other hand, have not chosen to be famous. Members of royal families are born into fame, as are the children of celebrities. Ordinary people in the news often become well-known through no fault of their own. It is my opinion that the media have no right to intrude into these people’s private lives. I would even go so far as to say that I support an extension of the law to guarantee their privacy. The media should be prevented from reporting on things that should be private matters.
As the media continue to become more and more powerful in our society, so the question of privacy becomes more important. Everyone deserves a private life, although perhaps some deserve it more than others.
Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'in fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.182926829268 0.247107183377 74% => OK
Verbs: 0.173780487805 0.155533422707 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.094512195122 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0609756097561 0.0501214627716 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0579268292683 0.0437548338989 132% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.137195121951 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0396341463415 0.0403226058552 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4234704141 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0335365853659 0.0326793684256 103% => OK
Particles: 0.00609756097561 0.00163938923432 372% => OK
Determiners: 0.094512195122 0.0861772015684 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0274390243902 0.021408717616 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0182926829268 0.011925033212 153% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1661.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 295.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63050847458 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325423728814 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220338983051 0.28420135186 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142372881356 0.203846283523 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0745762711864 0.137316102897 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4234704141 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55593220339 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 57.8832848537 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4375 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4686698717 49.517814964 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8125 127.492653851 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 40.4713983051 49.1944974215 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.22916666667 1.69124875643 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396312915616 0.332605444948 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0867675096905 0.102741220458 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0444425092627 0.0668466124924 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49177019282 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12702162466 0.148594505496 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143313621784 0.134430193775 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738185957477 0.0742795772207 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.287170724951 0.324371583561 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105231588622 0.0638462369009 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243059091199 0.228012699653 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909400262609 0.058150111329 156% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.