children in some parts of world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. some people think this is a positive change. However others think of it as negative change.what is your opinion
There is a global controversy that children in the past bear more burden of responsibilities in comparison with this era. Some people assert that it is a positive alteration, while others persistently hold the opposite view. To me the idea of latter party seem more appealing given that this lack of responsibility have contributed to detrimental effect on children both personally and socially
On the other hand, it is often said that these days parent don’t tend to put a proportion of responsibilities regarding either family or other agenda on the shoulders of the children. This policy not only would bring about negative effects on children life now, but it would also lead to difficulties for them in the future. Although before parents were strict and involve youngsters more in handling the tasks, this trend efficiently had directly with formation of their characteristics as a practical and tough and tough person subsequently. For example, whenever our parent or grandparent tell their diary of their childhood, it wasn’t life that much easy for them to pass. They should do hardship to support themselves or their
family financially.
On the other hand, when it comes to social properties of children, it is manifest that formerly they were more sociable and tend to have interaction with surrounding. However, nowadays they want to busy themselves with virtual network. They don’t any more enthusiastic to handle their task through their connection with others. For instance, with advent of information technology children more are fond of purchasing their thing online. So, it would play an immense role in making them lazy in dealing with problems that is more in need of being in touch with people.
To sum up, it would be distinctively wise if parent force their children to be more accustomed to accept some responsibility in their life. Besides, parent should encourage them to commit themselves to communities. Not only would these approaches have optimistic result in their perspective life, but it would also cause to be vibrant.
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...on children both personally and socially On the other hand, it is often said that...
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... hardship to support themselves or their family financially. On the other hand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, regarding, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23353293413 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99625066005 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6313119107 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.533333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152412292348 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560510624448 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060647987754 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112707062341 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739798687429 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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