Climate change and about the roles that Government, Corporate and Individuals can play to improve it.

Essay topics:

Climate change and about the roles that Government, Corporate and Individuals can play to improve it.

The global climate has been changing drastically since past decades owing to numerous reasons and human activities. Some activists believe that environment change is occurring due to global warming, while others say that lack of the governments and individuals concentration leads to various atmospheric changes. I am inclined to believe that both the government and individuals are equally responsible for causes and their control. The following paragraphs will analyse the potential causes, underlying responsible authorities, and their measures.

Firstly, global warming is a prime reason for the environment change. Also, the global warming leads to rising in temperature, melting polar ice, and thus, increasing sea levels. This is happening because of the arduous human activities; for example, people are driving their personal car every day for commuting, which emitting lots of carbon dioxide in the environment and using fossil fuel.

Second, the governments and individuals have to take care of the climate in which they are living in. The governments should run campaigns, and individual have to follow and promote these adverts awareness into the societies. As an example, the USA government, organising “green seminars” every six months in order to think, research and provide optimal solutions to save the environment and US citizens are actively becoming members of this seminar clubs.

In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that, global warming is a major concern for the nations for the climate change. Thus, both states and folks both have to participate actively in this movement of environment change. It is expected that cognisance of this education and further, the governments should establish climate change guidelines to educate people.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70740740741 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94938788376 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6915632696 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.538461538 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105375460417 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03913712841 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370562686464 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637370303427 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038618870342 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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