Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
• comics
• books
• radio
• television
• film
• theatre
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is thought by some people that media is a manipulating machine, which tries to control our feelings, use by governments or corporations in order to gain more benefits for them. Other people think that media is a good way to achieve more knowledge or to be in touch with breaking news. We can see many beneficial things in media, also it influences negatively the population.
One evident advantage is that media provide a lot of information, which might be transformed into knowledge. This kind of data can be collected from sources such as books, television or film. For instance, some individuals tend to read books according to with their preferences. Books can offer new words in the purpose to improve vocabulary of a person. Moreover, the television and movie may help if humans are watching at documentaries or science-fiction (show/film) and also be in touch with what it is new.
In the other hand, communicating information through media is sometimes unbeneficial because might contains incorrectly of false information or influences people to became more violence. The majority of citizens are attracted by horror, action, drama or thriller content. For example, a detective book may include sexual and violence content, that means some material may not be suitable for children to see this kind of contents. Although, there may be mild strong language and some violence or abuse. It is safer if children grows up without seeing such as content. However, the media includes subliminal messages in order to manipulate the society like music videos.
To sum up, I admit that are advantages and disadvantages in media, but more of them are benefits because media offers reasonable information and helps the population to be informed , even if some data are wrong, they can be selected. Therefore, the individuals must be careful about all data communicated by media
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260997067449 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.16715542522 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0821114369501 0.0946595960268 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0293255131965 0.0501214627716 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0322580645161 0.0437548338989 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129032258065 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0381231671554 0.0403226058552 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98052655405 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0351906158358 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0058651026393 0.00163938923432 358% => OK
Determiners: 0.0674486803519 0.0861772015684 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0322580645161 0.021408717616 151% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0117302052786 0.011925033212 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1883.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11363636364 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344155844156 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295454545455 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.233766233766 0.203846283523 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155844155844 0.137316102897 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98052655405 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 63.9494693311 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.25 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4637428909 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6875 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.814263465372 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 48.7954545455 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.87179487179 1.69124875643 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339679745511 0.332605444948 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0850070710732 0.102741220458 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0675406545377 0.0668466124924 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474185546732 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158584801336 0.148594505496 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124255968698 0.134430193775 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503499069212 0.0742795772207 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.298661481976 0.324371583561 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.016006186977 0.0638462369009 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234833659531 0.228012699653 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708591231472 0.058150111329 122% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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