compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. state which you consider to be the most effective.comicsbooksradiotelevisionfilmthearegive the reason for your answer and include any relevant examp

Essay topics:

compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. state which you consider to be the most effective.
comics
books
radio
television
film
theare

give the reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

There are many ways to deliver information in communicating. In this case, firstly informing the three of benefits using media such as comics, books, radio, televisions, film and theater and followed by the non-benefits using them and which one is the most successful.

Television, Radio and Film might be the best choice to spread information to the society. They are more attractive and informative, somehow entertaining. Current research exposes if people spend most of their times in front of TV. As it knows, TV serves various program such as News, Politics, Entertainment and else. It similar goes to the Radio and Film. Even several films are used to promote the environment issues such as saving the sharks and illegal logging. It makes the information faster than other platforms.

The media like Books, Comics and Theater are another references but not working effectively. Only small number people like reading. Mostly, the comics are found for entertaining and the majority of the readers are teenagers. They enjoy the visual more than the information itself. While Theater is only popular in some groups of people and commonly showing the specific show like culture or urban legend. Those have mentioned get in the small number of the people and only people who have specific interest will be into it.

In conclusion, the mainstream and interesting medias that provide various programs can be reached by all ages and the information will be acquired equally. Overall, the media that not familiar with majority of people are not delivered well and will create information gap among society.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71452372494 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592307692308 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1321298203 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5294117647 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0863844220668 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0231896078352 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309339017354 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554588081978 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250493652303 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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