Computers have made a better and safer world. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, computers have increasingly been popular around the world. It is true that computers have a pivotal impact on daily lives because of creating a safer and better world. While I agree that using computers improve our lives, I do not agree that computers have made the world safer.
On the one hand, I suppose that the invention of computers play a vital role in making a better life. Firstly, compared with the past, computers can be considered as effective learning tools for those who have no chance to enter university or courses. Students can have access to the huge amount of information on the internet through websites such as Wikipedia, Khan’s Academy, Code Academy and so forth. Secondly, with the help of computers and the Internet, people can talk to friends, relatives and partners that are living overseas, which connects people all over the world and help them keeps in touch with others.
However, I believe that computers result in the danger of our safety. It is noted that the number of computer crimes has increased since 2000, they hacked numerous the credit card numbers of the people and misuse them or they stole important data from big organizations. Take The US as an example, there were many sophisticated cyberattacks attacking on government computers and hacking attempts of the CIA’s main computer in 2016, which is big threat to the US government security. Besides, many people utilize computers to store data about their business. If their computers are stolen or get infected with a virus, all data is likely to be lost completely.
In conclusion, although I think that our lives become better than before with the advent of computers, I believe that computers bring many problems related to our secure.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00680272109 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64052506569 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3751718637 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326626203525 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125163049803 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135175196206 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210841601448 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.195631066683 0.056905535591 344% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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