Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
One of many benefits of advanced technology is that it provides identical products and services to any individual globally. In my opinion, this advancement brings higher standard of living to humanity in many aspects, such as healthcare and transportation.
First, public health in rural area can be improved by using high quality products, including medicines and items of medical equipment, from other developed countries. Shipping those commodities across the world within a short period can save many people lifes who are in need. For instance, my uncle was suffered from diabetes, and he needed a medicine that could not be produced in Thailand, his homeland. Therefore, doctor had to urgently order that pill from USA in order to protect my uncle’s life. Clearly, international trade, which now is extended to every continents, is definitely beneficial to people healthcare, especially in un-urban countries that cannot produce some advance medicines.
Second, some kinds of transport, for example car and airplane, even though only few regions can make them, are being used virtually everywhere in the world. Distance cannot obstruct these companies to be limited their business in their manufacturing countries, because nowadays people can buy and sell using only telephone and internet. For instance, Toyota, one of low cost car manufacturing companies, is based its production in few countries, but its ability to distribute the car across the continents enables people to purchase its car almost anywhere in the world, bringing comfortableness for human being because of its affordable price that any typical person can reach.
In conclusion, offering the ability to equally access to any product, especially drug and vehicle, that human need is a valuable progress that makes the world better, and although it will forms similarity over the world, it should be continued and expanded more and more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'valuable progress'.
Suggestion: valuable progress
...ly drug and vehicle, that human need is a valuable progress that makes the world better, and althou...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'form'
Suggestion: form
... the world better, and although it will forms similarity over the world, it should be...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270348837209 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.133720930233 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0872093023256 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0552325581395 0.0501214627716 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0436046511628 0.0437548338989 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113372093023 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0494186046512 0.0403226058552 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89598892022 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.031976744186 0.0326793684256 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0581395348837 0.0861772015684 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0290697674419 0.021408717616 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0174418604651 0.011925033212 146% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1924.0 1933.35771543 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.4347826087 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.428093645485 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.334448160535 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.274247491639 0.203846283523 135% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.167224080268 0.137316102897 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89598892022 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.037074148 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648829431438 0.56093040696 116% => OK
Word variations: 77.9337229488 60.7387585426 128% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 27.1818181818 20.7743622355 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4975235483 49.517814964 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.909090909 127.492653851 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7743622355 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 60.6266342353 49.1944974215 123% => OK
Elegance: 1.8625 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323236284987 0.332605444948 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0866763346052 0.102741220458 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0517551451341 0.0668466124924 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.573979019036 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184666507294 0.148594505496 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123227408574 0.134430193775 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601489782255 0.0742795772207 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.255993365618 0.324371583561 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0150893008321 0.0638462369009 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200760330755 0.228012699653 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540259515902 0.058150111329 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.