Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that there are becoming less living languages every year. The number of people see many advantages to this state of affairs. I can consider myself as one of these people, since I fundamentally agree that it is a positive change rather than a negative one.
First of all, there is no doubt that different languages spoken often cause misunderstanding and even conflicts between people of various nationalities. Such unpleasant situations are experienced not only in private relations but also in business, industries and politics, which may lead to crucial consequences. Speaking several common languages would reduce the scale and spread of problems described above. It definitely would connect people from different parts of the world, make business deals easier and more available. In addition, fewer spoken languages would result in the growth of possibilities to share experience and opinion for specialists from a range of essential industries, for instance, medicine, education and science.
In addition, despite the fact that nowadays people have a great amount of opportunities to move (or travel) from one country to another, the need to study a new language is still a noticeable problem and a barrier. Several living languages would make processes of visiting foreign countries or changing country of living: there would be less difficulties with finding job, entering school or university, dealing with commodity concerns and so on.
To sum up, to my mind, the existence of a few languages on our planet would open new facilities of traveling, communicating with other nations and exchanging experience. Moreover, it would benefit both individuals and thw whole industries and countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun difficulties is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...nging country of living: there would be less difficulties with finding job, entering...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, for instance, in addition, no doubt, first of all, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41044776119 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02364079437 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1510551929 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18352350139 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652943122513 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452157212554 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100669177593 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406330331093 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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