Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Essay topics:

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Today, the disappearance of languages is a controversial issue. It is claimed that fewer languages will make life easier. It would appear that the disadvantages of the idea cannot be overlooked.

On the one hand, since all our knowledge about the world has not been written, language extinction may result in loss of knowledge which has not been scientifically discovered yet. For example, in many areas agricultural information regarding, for instance, plant growth and soil gained through experience over centuries, has been transmitted orally. Therefore, when the indigenous languages disappear, agriculture in those area will be damaged. Moreover, from a scientific point of view, it has been proven that bilingualism or multilingualism can stave off dementia. This means that not only can preserving a language be effective for society but also it is useful for individuals. Hence, native speakers of an endangered language should consider keeping it alive when they need to learn a dominant language.

On the other hand, it goes without saying that language and culture are closely tied together and what can unite people is culture. This means that the fewer tongues are alive, the more people have similar culture which in turn leads to the more peaceful society and world. Perhaps, another supporting argument of the idea of better life with fewer languages is the fast growing relationships among people from all over the world. In fact, if individuals have to deal with fewer tongue in their connections, it will be easier for them to expand relationships.

In conclusion, language loss is an issue which is relevant to modern world. It would seem that the advantages of linguistic diversity outweigh its disadvantages. If a language die, both individuals and society will be affected negatively.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'those areas'?
Suggestion: this area; those areas
...ous languages disappear, agriculture in those area will be damaged. Moreover, from a scien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34027777778 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00832940584 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3416971193 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283237462902 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942369510962 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696793457203 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181657378445 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502007795848 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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