Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Languages have two faces; while it is used to communicate in daily lives, it also contains the country’s heritage values. In this modern era, there are more than a thousand of languages are spoken globally. As a small section of people are facing a threat of their languages are becoming extinct whereas the world is becoming the one language globe. From this, the countries will be enjoyed from free of language barriers (the easier to communicate) but it cannot deny that this means the countries will be loss of their cultural values. Therefore, I strongly argue that every language should be preserved in order to stick to the cultural roots which have valuable resources that are beneficial for human life.
Some people argue that, having a common language around the world can lessen the language barriers between countries for the economic growth. In this case, the world can enjoy from globalisation by conducting easy conversations. For example, in India, even though their main official language is Hindi, they adopted the world's common language (English) for the benefits of economic growth in the foreseeable future. Due to this adoption, India's economy has expanded drastically and it is expected to increase continuously. Therefore, it is apparent that without having a language barrier, can achieve the economic growth in the whole world.
However, it is clear that, the language holds of many of countries’ cultural values. For instance, Chinese language is completely different from Korean despite their geographically next to it, because there is a historical reason. In the case of South Africa, for instance, after it officially identified their official language as English, their traditional and historical information became vanished. Nowadays, South Africa has the similar culture and habits of those from Western countries despite its economic growth. This is the one example of a country where adopted of a common language of English in the expectation of economic growth but in fact it failed.
In conclusion, since the country's own uniqueness is derived from the language, it is important to hold on. A language holds various details of information from history, culture and tradition, it can be said that the language is the existence of a country. Thus, all the languages in the world should be protected for the sake of cultural and valuable resources.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'whereas', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231651376147 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.142201834862 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105504587156 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0298165137615 0.0501214627716 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.045871559633 0.0437548338989 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149082568807 0.122226691241 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0344036697248 0.0403226058552 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82891501205 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0183486238532 0.0326793684256 56% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107798165138 0.0861772015684 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0206422018349 0.021408717616 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00688073394495 0.011925033212 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2390.0 1933.35771543 124% => OK
No of words: 384.0 316.048096192 122% => OK
Chars per words: 6.22395833333 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.421875 0.374742101984 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.3359375 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.247395833333 0.203846283523 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125 0.137316102897 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82891501205 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.037074148 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497395833333 0.56093040696 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.6243598986 60.7387585426 88% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3333333333 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7927315243 49.517814964 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.777777778 127.492653851 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.814263465372 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 54.9270833333 49.1944974215 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.90526315789 1.69124875643 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247576192536 0.332605444948 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127565300396 0.102741220458 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0583742355346 0.0668466124924 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.546864955127 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131511623811 0.148594505496 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112616837559 0.134430193775 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472615531839 0.0742795772207 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.460597704394 0.324371583561 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0402203632863 0.0638462369009 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189091539225 0.228012699653 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072155927284 0.058150111329 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.